Great start! Your description was good, you spelt everything correctly, although you could have put in about ten commas as I could not take a breath. Otherwise, it was fabulistic! Be sure to check out my blog, or the world of Water.
Brilliant start !! Your spelling was alls good and
So was your description but I agree Louis CB and
Jake there should of been a few commas but
Other wise it was fantastic.
Great start! Your description was good, you spelt everything correctly, although you could have put in about ten commas as I could not take a breath. Otherwise, it was fabulistic! Be sure to check out my blog, or the world of Water.
well done!! the only thing I can say is the I should be a capital letter but apart from that very good.
Good start… I agree with Louis CB, there should have been a few commas in there. I loved it, cant wait to read more from you!
Brilliant start !! Your spelling was alls good and
So was your description but I agree Louis CB and
Jake there should of been a few commas but
Other wise it was fantastic.