Well done Maud
I forgot to tell you, when you make your next comment, go on to the tab in the left hand corner which has your username brown1 and change it to just your first name…so we all know who you are!
I loved the tension in your story, and fantastic use of speech marks. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
May be try and persuade your friends while on holiday to blog your work.
Well done Maud
I forgot to tell you, when you make your next comment, go on to the tab in the left hand corner which has your username brown1 and change it to just your first name…so we all know who you are!
I loved the tension in your story, and fantastic use of speech marks. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
May be try and persuade your friends while on holiday to blog your work.