Nice work Beatrix I love your rehtorical question’s in your piece of writing .Mabey next time try to use a variety of connectives . But otherwise it was a good peice of writing !
I like your descriptions and the rhetorical question. By the way, Drew ate outside, we ate half an hour after you. We were starving!
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Nice work Beatrix I love your rehtorical question’s in your piece of writing .Mabey next time try to use a variety of connectives . But otherwise it was a good peice of writing !
I like your descriptions and the rhetorical question. By the way, Drew ate outside, we ate half an hour after you. We were starving!