Hi Laila,
Your work was very good but remember to check your work over and over again. Also, if you’re not sure about spelling maybe ask your mum some questions, it shows because you spelt ‘cosy’ wrong. Another small mistake was that you didn’t leave a space after full stops. Apart from that it was really good and I can’t wait to read more from you.
From Rafi.
Hi Laila,
Your work was very good but remember to check your work over and over again. Also, if you’re not sure about spelling maybe ask your mum some questions, it shows because you spelt ‘cosy’ wrong. Another small mistake was that you didn’t leave a space after full stops. Apart from that it was really good and I can’t wait to read more from you.
From Rafi.
Thank You all for your lovely feedback and nice comments I will asure I will use them in future
I liked it, ( especially ” your a super mum”) but dont forget to check your spellings. Also the last few lines because it made me excited.