chapter 2 A whole new world

2 Responses to chapter 2 A whole new world

1. Alexandra says:

   February 8, 2012 at 3:14 pm

   Hi Laila,

   I love your story its great I esspecially like the suspense at the end also you forgot to put the closing speech marks.
2. beatrix says:

   February 8, 2012 at 3:14 pm

   I thought it was really good because it was really interesting and not to long because this was your 100 word challenge.
   mabey you could try and not use said.

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