Hi Niyusha – thanks for entering the 100wc this week! Well you sound like a bit of a chocolate addict! Poor old Coco, getting the blame for the bunny melting! You used the prompt really well to create an interesting and entertaining piece of work. You really get across to the reader how desperate your character is for their chocolate – well done. Also, I spotted a lot of excellent time connectives in your work – again, well done!
Niyusha,
Well, it seems that the term “chocoholic” would apply to your character–good work in developing her/him! And those pets–they’re not always cooperative, are they? Thanks for your participation in the 100WC–nice work.
Hi Niyusha – thanks for entering the 100wc this week! Well you sound like a bit of a chocolate addict! Poor old Coco, getting the blame for the bunny melting! You used the prompt really well to create an interesting and entertaining piece of work. You really get across to the reader how desperate your character is for their chocolate – well done. Also, I spotted a lot of excellent time connectives in your work – again, well done!
Keep on blogging, Niyusha 🙂
Mr K.
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Niyusha,
Well, it seems that the term “chocoholic” would apply to your character–good work in developing her/him! And those pets–they’re not always cooperative, are they? Thanks for your participation in the 100WC–nice work.