Hello Joseph, What a kind thought; buying for others. A lovely story too, well written. Your use of adjectives is good; especially, ‘glistening, golden foil.’ A very ‘modern’ style of writing. Hope to read more of your work. Liz
Sorry Liz, the name is Louis!
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Hello Joseph,
What a kind thought; buying for others. A lovely story too, well written. Your use of adjectives is good; especially, ‘glistening, golden foil.’ A very ‘modern’ style of writing.
Hope to read more of your work.
Liz
Sorry Liz, the name is Louis!