The prize of Easter day re-mix

4 Responses to The prize of Easter day re-mix

1. Ryan says:

   April 2, 2012 at 1:33 pm

   I found it really funny. Well done.
   • Grace says:

     April 3, 2012 at 2:15 pm

     Thank you,
     I did not mean to make it humourous but sometimes it just happens.
2. Mrs. Pheasey (Team 100WC) says:

   April 10, 2012 at 3:48 pm

   Hi Grace,

   A great choice of words that you’ve used. I like the opening and the alliteration. I thought the ending could mean two things. Either that it was torturous for the story character as he or she watched the chocolate melt, or torturous for the bunny! I thought it was a very good 100WC. 🙂
3. Esme says:

   April 17, 2012 at 5:50 pm

   I liked your story
   well done

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