Wow Grace your story is amazing i like the the part where you said (“Mystical greeny, greyey eyes just like Katie had seen before”) And it probley took ages to make the voise of you telling the story but when it started straight away with Quick under here, it made me get a bit confused so you could have started with a man or monster was kid napping me.but well done appart from that.
Really good. clever what you did .
By the way everyone, you may have to wait a little while for the sound track to load.
I really liked it but you could have put in more description.
Thank you for your comments, could you hear it alright? I could but only faintly. But it might pass.
Wow Grace your story is amazing i like the the part where you said (“Mystical greeny, greyey eyes just like Katie had seen before”) And it probley took ages to make the voise of you telling the story but when it started straight away with Quick under here, it made me get a bit confused so you could have started with a man or monster was kid napping me.but well done appart from that.