easters diaster!

Posted on April 1, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to easters diaster!

  1. Ryan says:
    April 2, 2012 at 1:25 pm

    I found it really interesting but you could have added the full stops.

  2. Ida says:
    April 17, 2012 at 9:04 am

    Its really good Merley because it is fall of discription , you could have said why the choclet was melting. Why is there a pitcher of a wendy house and a teddy in a tree? Dose that have somthind to do with the story?

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