Thats really good Alisa, I liked how you didn’t only put the coloured letter at the front of the line like they do in most poems like that, but in the middle too! To improve you maybe could have put a comma at the end of each line but its still really great.Well Done!
Thats really good Alisa, I liked how you didn’t only put the coloured letter at the front of the line like they do in most poems like that, but in the middle too! To improve you maybe could have put a comma at the end of each line but its still really great.Well Done!