Hi Hope, I think your poem is realy good and it teaches you a lesson, that in other countrys people dont have enough food
and we do, so we should count ourselfs lucky.
Hi Hope. I really like how ypur poem teaches a lesson on food and at the same time is magnificently funny. This remindes me of when I was 6 and my sister didn’t want to have a banana but my mum said they were good for you.
Hi Hope, I really liked your poem because you have made good use of rhyming couplets. Also it flows very well. It makes me think of a time when my mum told me to count myself lucky for having food to eat. Where did you get inspiration?
WELDONE HOPE!I thought your work was brilliant.Why did you write a poem about a bannana? My favriout line in your poem was banans are long and big and not very nice! Weldone!
Hi Hope, that was a realy good I liked the bit about adding some nutmeg spice.Have you ever tryed a banana with nutmeg spice?
My cousin Thomes hates bananas, but still he askes to have it!
Hi Hope, I think your poem is realy good and it teaches you a lesson, that in other countrys people dont have enough food
and we do, so we should count ourselfs lucky.
Hi Hope. I really like how ypur poem teaches a lesson on food and at the same time is magnificently funny. This remindes me of when I was 6 and my sister didn’t want to have a banana but my mum said they were good for you.
Hi Hope, I really liked your poem because you have made good use of rhyming couplets. Also it flows very well. It makes me think of a time when my mum told me to count myself lucky for having food to eat. Where did you get inspiration?
Vassilis
WELDONE HOPE!I thought your work was brilliant.Why did you write a poem about a bannana? My favriout line in your poem was banans are long and big and not very nice! Weldone!
Merley
Hi Hope, that was a realy good I liked the bit about adding some nutmeg spice.Have you ever tryed a banana with nutmeg spice?
My cousin Thomes hates bananas, but still he askes to have it!