Very very good work. I love your discription all round but in particlar I really like “Steam bubbled out of the scalding-hot cauldron as my skin prickled in the heat. Worry smothered my thoughts as I prepared to be shoved inside the immense cooking pot.” Why did you choose to write about this? Did you have any reason to write about this? Why did you choose to write about such a depressing subject?
Very very good work. I love your discription all round but in particlar I really like “Steam bubbled out of the scalding-hot cauldron as my skin prickled in the heat. Worry smothered my thoughts as I prepared to be shoved inside the immense cooking pot.” Why did you choose to write about this? Did you have any reason to write about this? Why did you choose to write about such a depressing subject?