Wow this is a brilliant 100 word challenge with lots of tense . You had lots of adjectives and lots of fab wow words . I loved it .Well done hope you write a nother one !
Wow, Rafi, what an incredible piece of writing! I particularly enjoyed your descriptions – “nerves of steel and blood of poison”, “a scaly mess of bones”….these were really evocative and helped me to picture the scene very clearly. Keep up the great 100WC work!
Rafi this a brilliant peice of writing, with some fabulous description. I could really picture the scene you were describing and I’m glad it was you there to defeat the dragon, rather than me! He sounded very scary! Keep up the brilliant work!
I like how you said ”The monstorous head slowy raised.”
nick in Texas at Mossman
Wow this is a brilliant 100 word challenge with lots of tense . You had lots of adjectives and lots of fab wow words . I loved it .Well done hope you write a nother one !
Wow, Rafi, what an incredible piece of writing! I particularly enjoyed your descriptions – “nerves of steel and blood of poison”, “a scaly mess of bones”….these were really evocative and helped me to picture the scene very clearly. Keep up the great 100WC work!
Rafi this a brilliant peice of writing, with some fabulous description. I could really picture the scene you were describing and I’m glad it was you there to defeat the dragon, rather than me! He sounded very scary! Keep up the brilliant work!