I love the description and use of vocabulary in your first paragraph Louis. I think if I met some talking beetles I would freak out and run too! I thought it was funny how he was looking forward to meeting the dragon yet the beetles frightened him.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Prior (Team 100WC)
I really like your topic that you chose.I enjoyed reading about the beatles, it was kind of catchy. My favourite part of the tale was when the jazz beatles said get out were’re having a jazz lesson. However, I think you could have editied your work because you missed out a simple word.Well done!
I love the description and use of vocabulary in your first paragraph Louis. I think if I met some talking beetles I would freak out and run too! I thought it was funny how he was looking forward to meeting the dragon yet the beetles frightened him.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Prior (Team 100WC)
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wow Louis I really liked your piece of work and the title is really catchy and it was quite funny with beetles having a jazz lesson. Well done.
I really like your topic that you chose.I enjoyed reading about the beatles, it was kind of catchy. My favourite part of the tale was when the jazz beatles said get out were’re having a jazz lesson. However, I think you could have editied your work because you missed out a simple word.Well done!