Nice. First of all, you spelt Arther wrong. On the other hand your writing is imaginative and clever. Poor dragon! I liked the description of how he was feeling and looking. The pear could have a more interestibng role, as in you could describe it with more importance! Clever piece of writing and I hope to read more soon
I agree with Jess that I feel a bit sorry for the dragon. This is a good story for the 100WC which would be even better if you could read through it & make those changes to the capital letters. Thank you for sharing your writing!
Nice. First of all, you spelt Arther wrong. On the other hand your writing is imaginative and clever. Poor dragon! I liked the description of how he was feeling and looking. The pear could have a more interestibng role, as in you could describe it with more importance! Clever piece of writing and I hope to read more soon
Hello Aaima!
I agree with Jess that I feel a bit sorry for the dragon. This is a good story for the 100WC which would be even better if you could read through it & make those changes to the capital letters. Thank you for sharing your writing!