Hi Niyusha, After having recently read your post I wish to tell you about what I think of it. Your description is very good. I particually loved the description hard and scaly. I thought you placed all the commers in the right place. However you said the tail was like a dragons tail and then you said it was which didn’t make much sense. Overall ,however, I really enjoyed it.
Hi Niyusha
I really enjoyed your 100WC using this week’s St George’s prompt. I liked the way you started your story, setting the scene and introducing the main character. You used some good vocabulary to describe the dragon’s tail and you left your reader’s on the edges of their seats waiting for the battle to commence! Well done.
Hi Niyusha, After having recently read your post I wish to tell you about what I think of it. Your description is very good. I particually loved the description hard and scaly. I thought you placed all the commers in the right place. However you said the tail was like a dragons tail and then you said it was which didn’t make much sense. Overall ,however, I really enjoyed it.
Hi Niyusha
I really enjoyed your 100WC using this week’s St George’s prompt. I liked the way you started your story, setting the scene and introducing the main character. You used some good vocabulary to describe the dragon’s tail and you left your reader’s on the edges of their seats waiting for the battle to commence! Well done.
wow what an a good story and I like the wa you put in lots of wow words and well done keep it up.