Hi Liam,
You’ve used some great words in this blog. Like ventured and forth. Be sure to check that you leave a space after your puctuation and make sure you use a capital after punctuation also. Overall though, keep on blogging these amazing stories because I am enjoying them…
Hello Liam, thanks for taking part in the 100WC. You included some great description in your piece. Try not to swap person in your writing next time- you began in the third person and ended in the first person.
I hope that you take part again and keep on blogging 🙂
Hi Liam,
You’ve used some great words in this blog. Like ventured and forth. Be sure to check that you leave a space after your puctuation and make sure you use a capital after punctuation also. Overall though, keep on blogging these amazing stories because I am enjoying them…
Hello Liam, thanks for taking part in the 100WC. You included some great description in your piece. Try not to swap person in your writing next time- you began in the third person and ended in the first person.
I hope that you take part again and keep on blogging 🙂
Thank you for commenting on my work and I will try to keep in the
same person as I started in.