The Dragon of Athenea-100 word challenge

Posted on April 24, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Dragon of Athenea-100 word challenge

  1. Clare Powell (Team 100WC) says:
    April 27, 2012 at 4:05 pm

    This is extremely well written Alfie. You build the tension well, you use a chatty tone to draw your reader in and have added some excellent vocabulary. I love your use of ghastly and tremendous. Thank you for sharing in the 100WC.

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