Hello Grace, well done for linking in to St George as well. I enjoyed your 100WC . You made a great effort to vary the length of sentences and included some vivid description. I liked the way that you ended it; it gave the reader the opportunity to think what happened next. Well done. Keep on writing and taking part in these challenges :O)
Hello Grace, well done for linking in to St George as well. I enjoyed your 100WC . You made a great effort to vary the length of sentences and included some vivid description. I liked the way that you ended it; it gave the reader the opportunity to think what happened next. Well done. Keep on writing and taking part in these challenges :O)
Hi Grace, I realy like your ending, how it was a clif hanger and how you wrote “razer sharp teeth” and that really emphsised how sharp it was. (;