The Mongolian Bat – 100 Word Challenge

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1. Dr Rodgers Team 100WC says:

   May 8, 2012 at 5:01 pm

   Wow, Rafi, what a vivid and rich piece of writing, I loved it. My job is to suggest improvements, but it’s hard to find fault where you have written so effectively: all you need is an apostrophe in “Bones protruded out of the bat’s lean body”.

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