Rafi,
This is an amazing creation of a story and it has a great story line. You used some amazing description like: Maybe when he was born aliens injected him with some sort of poison which is now, after many years, taking control over him! I thought that yor second line; I roared a hint of laughter didn’t really work though.
Rafi,
This is an amazing creation of a story and it has a great story line. You used some amazing description like: Maybe when he was born aliens injected him with some sort of poison which is now, after many years, taking control over him! I thought that yor second line; I roared a hint of laughter didn’t really work though.