Hello Imogen, I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! I loved that you look your piece of writing from a different perspective (the night zoo keeper) and made it creative and interesting to read. Your creature that you have described uses lots of adjectives which is great and it also gave facts about it too. Keep up the good work!
Imogen – you ended strongly with a vivid simile. Well done. You look like you have mastered using brackets, too:)
Hello Imogen, I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! I loved that you look your piece of writing from a different perspective (the night zoo keeper) and made it creative and interesting to read. Your creature that you have described uses lots of adjectives which is great and it also gave facts about it too. Keep up the good work!