This is a super piece of writing Freya. I can see which picture you chose which comes from the words you used. to make it even better read it through (out loud is best) and you will see that some of the punctuation is not quite right. I hope to see your work again on the 100WC!
What an imaginative creature you have created Freya. I love the words that describe how it both looks and sounds. Just make sure to watch your punctuation a bit – otherwise, good job!
This is a super piece of writing Freya. I can see which picture you chose which comes from the words you used. to make it even better read it through (out loud is best) and you will see that some of the punctuation is not quite right. I hope to see your work again on the 100WC!
What an imaginative creature you have created Freya. I love the words that describe how it both looks and sounds. Just make sure to watch your punctuation a bit – otherwise, good job!