Hello Laila,
What a lovely story about a black panther. Your description was so good, I could definately draw him now!
Be careful with mixing up full stops and commas next time.
Keep on entering the 100 word challenge, you are good.
Liz
This is fantastic!
I love how descriptive you have made the panther, I could really visualise what he looks like.
Good use of similes aswell.
Keep up the good work!
amazing twist a good writer always do!! I really liked this particular description:as fierce as fire it really made me think about its aperence
Hello Laila,
What a lovely story about a black panther. Your description was so good, I could definately draw him now!
Be careful with mixing up full stops and commas next time.
Keep on entering the 100 word challenge, you are good.
Liz
This is fantastic!
I love how descriptive you have made the panther, I could really visualise what he looks like.
Good use of similes aswell.
Keep up the good work!
Wo very good descriptive words! Great job! 🙂