Hi Jude,
Thanks for submitting this imaginative entry to the 100 word challenge. You were very brave to follow this scary beast into the park. Using the word ‘clambered’ is excellent. To make it easier for the reader, may I suggest that you read you writing again before submitting it and add full stops at end of sentences. Well done!
Hi Jude,
Thanks for submitting this imaginative entry to the 100 word challenge. You were very brave to follow this scary beast into the park. Using the word ‘clambered’ is excellent. To make it easier for the reader, may I suggest that you read you writing again before submitting it and add full stops at end of sentences. Well done!