The Fire World – Chapter 1

Posted on April 27, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Fire World – Chapter 1

  1. Alex C says:
    April 28, 2012 at 4:44 pm

    Hi Rafi, an incredible story once again I really liked the line “tremors shook the ground” I thought it was a great way to introduce the story I could really imagine what the story was like. Well done

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