Louis, I loved this piece of writing! I thought you used some excellent description which helped paint a vivid picture in my mind. I particularly likes when you said ‘ making havoc sound like a pin dropping’!
I’m looking forward to reading the follow up to this piece of writing- and I hope you are able to save your mum! 🙂
Well done Louis I really liked your work I even found it scary at bits! Who invented giving blood? Could you research it on the internet and then reply back to me on what it is! Well done!
Louis, I loved this piece of writing! I thought you used some excellent description which helped paint a vivid picture in my mind. I particularly likes when you said ‘ making havoc sound like a pin dropping’!
I’m looking forward to reading the follow up to this piece of writing- and I hope you are able to save your mum! 🙂
Well done Louis I really liked your work I even found it scary at bits! Who invented giving blood? Could you research it on the internet and then reply back to me on what it is! Well done!