What a wacky simpsons story, Alex! It included everything that the simpsons had in it, all the description and familiarity going round. All those weirdos, I couldn’t have coped. Well Done. I’m hoping to see another generation of this piece, but do try and keep the writing low (as in not such big paragraphs) as to keep more readers flocking.
Well done,
I really liked the story line because it was so unusual and wacky. It was funny and imaginative and made me wanting to read the sequel… If you do get round to doing one! Always remember not to start a sentence with a ‘but’ because technically its not proper English. Keepy bloggerining frenderino!
What a wacky simpsons story, Alex! It included everything that the simpsons had in it, all the description and familiarity going round. All those weirdos, I couldn’t have coped. Well Done. I’m hoping to see another generation of this piece, but do try and keep the writing low (as in not such big paragraphs) as to keep more readers flocking.
Well done,
I really liked the story line because it was so unusual and wacky. It was funny and imaginative and made me wanting to read the sequel… If you do get round to doing one! Always remember not to start a sentence with a ‘but’ because technically its not proper English. Keepy bloggerining frenderino!