Well done Bert, your content is amazing, I really liked the picture in my head as I read it. I loved your similie teeth like razors. You now need to start being more careful with your proof reading.
e.g. your title needs capital letters, you have a comma between it,s which looks a bit odd. Remember just spend 2 minutes reading through carefully so that others will be able to understand! Fantastic work though!
Well done Bert, your content is amazing, I really liked the picture in my head as I read it. I loved your similie teeth like razors. You now need to start being more careful with your proof reading.
e.g. your title needs capital letters, you have a comma between it,s which looks a bit odd. Remember just spend 2 minutes reading through carefully so that others will be able to understand! Fantastic work though!
Hi Bert, your story is quite interesting. Take note of spellings and proper punctuation as suggested by Ms. Ashraf. Well done!