This is a great piece of writing- loved the amazing vocabulary like collasal and thundered. It gave me a really great picture in my mind as I read it, also liked the repetition. Welldone!
Hello Louis, this is a super 100WC post. Plenty of wow words which help the reader to paint a picture in their minds. Next time, think about using some similes or alliteration to further develop descriptions. Keep on blogging :O)
This is a great piece of writing- loved the amazing vocabulary like collasal and thundered. It gave me a really great picture in my mind as I read it, also liked the repetition. Welldone!
Hello Louis, this is a super 100WC post. Plenty of wow words which help the reader to paint a picture in their minds. Next time, think about using some similes or alliteration to further develop descriptions. Keep on blogging :O)
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