Hello Jake, that was a brilliant imagination at work. Do however note your spellings e.g thought in line 2, I was surprised at… In line 3. Take note also to use the words or the prompt for 100wc without changing the content. Well done!
Well done Jake. Just inbetween them 2 words mountain and I put make shure nest time you put a comma inbatween them clawses, apart from that you did very well. well done again !!! 🙂 🙂
Hello Jake & thank you for writing such a great piece for the 100WC! I like the way you have included what you could hear & see. You have also left a great cliff hanger for another part!! Well done!
Hello Jake, that was a brilliant imagination at work. Do however note your spellings e.g thought in line 2, I was surprised at… In line 3. Take note also to use the words or the prompt for 100wc without changing the content. Well done!
Well done Jake. Just inbetween them 2 words mountain and I put make shure nest time you put a comma inbatween them clawses, apart from that you did very well. well done again !!! 🙂 🙂
Hello Jake & thank you for writing such a great piece for the 100WC! I like the way you have included what you could hear & see. You have also left a great cliff hanger for another part!! Well done!