Oh my goodness Harry! I love the music at the end. You have certainly left a cliff hanger there! I did wonder if perhaps it was a dream. Thank you so much for joining the 100WC – hope to see your work again!
Hello Harry. That was a wonderful story and your description made me want to read more! Great ending I loved the cliffhanger at the end it made me sad that your story had to end. How did you feel right at the moment the gaurds came??
Oh my goodness Harry! I love the music at the end. You have certainly left a cliff hanger there! I did wonder if perhaps it was a dream. Thank you so much for joining the 100WC – hope to see your work again!
Harry I loved the end – so dramatic! What a great story that keeps the reader wondering what will happen. Good job on the 100WC.
To Harry,
I really like your music the end.
You had a really good ending.
Hello Harry. That was a wonderful story and your description made me want to read more! Great ending I loved the cliffhanger at the end it made me sad that your story had to end. How did you feel right at the moment the gaurds came??
Thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you recognised the ending scene.