Rafi, this is a captivating start to a story, for the 100wc. It had me hooked from the beginning, with interesting adjectives, I felt like I was there with you. You included suspense well, making the reader always wanting more. Where is this story going next? I am very much hoping you carry this story on, and would love to read it!
Rafi, this is a captivating start to a story, for the 100wc. It had me hooked from the beginning, with interesting adjectives, I felt like I was there with you. You included suspense well, making the reader always wanting more. Where is this story going next? I am very much hoping you carry this story on, and would love to read it!
James (Team 100wc)