What a piece, Theo! I know where this comes from, the Wind in the Willows! The most descriptive and vivid part of this post was when you wrote ‘there were superb crystals that jutted out of the walls like javelins thrown into foam.’ I loved that, just what you need to become an amazing author, the most descriptive similes. Keep it up, I want to see more of that.
What a piece, Theo! I know where this comes from, the Wind in the Willows! The most descriptive and vivid part of this post was when you wrote ‘there were superb crystals that jutted out of the walls like javelins thrown into foam.’ I loved that, just what you need to become an amazing author, the most descriptive similes. Keep it up, I want to see more of that.