Hi, Imogen. Hey, this is a very good 100WC story! I like how you used different tones of voice for your characters, such as “exclaimed,” and “asked with fear in his voice.” Those kind of details make your story much more interesting, than just writing, “he said,” or “she said.” I also really admire how you bring in the idea of winning Olympic tickets. A very interesting, well-developed story. Good for you!
Hi, Imogen. Hey, this is a very good 100WC story! I like how you used different tones of voice for your characters, such as “exclaimed,” and “asked with fear in his voice.” Those kind of details make your story much more interesting, than just writing, “he said,” or “she said.” I also really admire how you bring in the idea of winning Olympic tickets. A very interesting, well-developed story. Good for you!