Oh Louis this is such a fun post! I love the picture of the monkeys at the end of the story. You have painted a great picture of the jungle with your excellent choice of vocabulary. Thank you so much for sharing your work on the 100WC!
Louis I just loved your story and how you so vividly described the jungle. And how creative to throw a pork chop into their adventure – great work on the 100WC!
Wow Louis what an exciting entry for the 100WC! You have used some absolutely brilliant vocabulary and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the fab work! 🙂
Wow, this is perfectly written! I loved the pork chop idea, and the description of the “dancing sparkles”. Lovely writing.
Oh Louis this is such a fun post! I love the picture of the monkeys at the end of the story. You have painted a great picture of the jungle with your excellent choice of vocabulary. Thank you so much for sharing your work on the 100WC!
Louis I just loved your story and how you so vividly described the jungle. And how creative to throw a pork chop into their adventure – great work on the 100WC!
Wow Louis what an exciting entry for the 100WC! You have used some absolutely brilliant vocabulary and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the fab work! 🙂