I really enjoyed your use of technical vocabulary such as ‘myth’ and ‘native’. You have really transported the reader into the jungle with your fantastic descriptive writing.
I would love to know why the birds are fleeing the jungle!
This is great writing Jessica! You paint a very vivid picture of the scene you describe and I like the way you magic yourself into the jungle with Moby.
It’s also very mysterious how you end your story, I wonder what are the birds flying away from.? Maybe a story for another weeks 100 word challenge? Keep up the great work.
Wow! What an amazing piece of writing. You created a scene right here in my mind. What’s your inspiration? You used really superb words to describe the scene. I especialy like the part where you said that Tim’s eyes were feasting on the sight before him. Thanks for sharing this.
Frang- Shrewsbery International School Bangkok
Wow! Another amazing piece of writing Jessica.
I really enjoyed your use of technical vocabulary such as ‘myth’ and ‘native’. You have really transported the reader into the jungle with your fantastic descriptive writing.
I would love to know why the birds are fleeing the jungle!
Keep up the great work
This is great writing Jessica! You paint a very vivid picture of the scene you describe and I like the way you magic yourself into the jungle with Moby.
It’s also very mysterious how you end your story, I wonder what are the birds flying away from.? Maybe a story for another weeks 100 word challenge? Keep up the great work.
Wow! What an amazing piece of writing. You created a scene right here in my mind. What’s your inspiration? You used really superb words to describe the scene. I especialy like the part where you said that Tim’s eyes were feasting on the sight before him. Thanks for sharing this.
Frang- Shrewsbery International School Bangkok