What wonderful, evocative images! We LOVE the “majestic” birds, dancing chicken legged tiger and chocolate trees. What a crazy jungle you’ve described 🙂
Louis, what a super piece of writing. You have used such a lot of descriptive language and chosen exactly the right adjectives and adverbs to describe the setting and the animals without overdoing it. As for your surprise at the end… Let me know where I can go and see these chocolate trees!
Dear Louis,
What an excellent work! I love your story. You use so much adjectives and WOW words! You use it in every sentences! You also have some speech to keep it more exciting! Wonderful! Can you describe the chocolate trees?
Sincerely,
Tat
Dear Louis,
Wow! I absolutely love your story! You have used many powerful adjectives and WOW words! Fantastic! Well done! Maybe you can describe the chocolate tree?
Outstanding Louis, I really like the words that you used like “Scampered and “futuristic”
Keep this up.
Hi Louis,
What wonderful, evocative images! We LOVE the “majestic” birds, dancing chicken legged tiger and chocolate trees. What a crazy jungle you’ve described 🙂
Tim & Moby
Wow! We loved your story. It was really funny and we wish we could read more.
Louis, what a super piece of writing. You have used such a lot of descriptive language and chosen exactly the right adjectives and adverbs to describe the setting and the animals without overdoing it. As for your surprise at the end… Let me know where I can go and see these chocolate trees!
Dear Louis,
What an excellent work! I love your story. You use so much adjectives and WOW words! You use it in every sentences! You also have some speech to keep it more exciting! Wonderful! Can you describe the chocolate trees?
Sincerely,
Tat
Dear Louis,
Wow! I absolutely love your story! You have used many powerful adjectives and WOW words! Fantastic! Well done! Maybe you can describe the chocolate tree?