Hello Jesse, I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! You have carried on from the video prompt well, keeping it very interesting. I love how descriptive you have been about what Tim and Moby saw at the end of the video. It is great that you have left a little cliff hanger, making the reader want more of the story. Keep up the good work!
Hello Jesse, I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! You have carried on from the video prompt well, keeping it very interesting. I love how descriptive you have been about what Tim and Moby saw at the end of the video. It is great that you have left a little cliff hanger, making the reader want more of the story. Keep up the good work!