Hi Armelle, thanks for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge. I really enjoyed reading your writing. It would make a good story opening. You’ve grabbed my attention and I want to know what happens next.
To make your writing even better, can you spot a very long sentence in your writing that you could turn into two sentences?
Keep up the fabulous work .
Hi Armelle, thanks for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge. I really enjoyed reading your writing. It would make a good story opening. You’ve grabbed my attention and I want to know what happens next.
To make your writing even better, can you spot a very long sentence in your writing that you could turn into two sentences?
Keep up the fabulous work .