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We really enjoyed reading your 100 words. We think that your synonyms for said are brilliant. Our wish for your writing is… less speech and more description. We would love to know what happens next!
5JM St Peter’s Catholic Primary School, Gloucester.
WOW!! I love your post. Your adjectives were really good and I can picture in my head what is happening. It has a “whats going to happen next” at the end of the story so it wants me to read more! WOW great job!
We really enjoyed reading your 100 words. We think that your synonyms for said are brilliant. Our wish for your writing is… less speech and more description. We would love to know what happens next!
5JM St Peter’s Catholic Primary School, Gloucester.
Wow! I love your writing! 🙂 Love it lots! I got blew away when I was reading it! 😀
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