Hi, Joseph! You have written what we call a cliff-hanger — a story where the end, or a break, comes right at the stop, leaving the reader to wonder what comes next. You did an excellent job with dialogue, and I love that your characters murmured and whispered instead of just saying! Great job!
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i am from st therese torquay australia i was just looking at your 100wc (tim and moby) it is amazing the dog sounds very strange.
Hi, Joseph! You have written what we call a cliff-hanger — a story where the end, or a break, comes right at the stop, leaving the reader to wonder what comes next. You did an excellent job with dialogue, and I love that your characters murmured and whispered instead of just saying! Great job!