It has a good description of the jungle however you did not describe what the cressidajean was so I am left not knowing what cressidajean is.
Hi Can. This is a good story. Have you been inspired by your teaching assistant Cressida’s name? Your punctuation could be improved a little. However, you have written an interesting and exciting story. Well done!
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It has a good description of the jungle however you did not describe what the cressidajean was so I am left not knowing what cressidajean is.
Hi Can. This is a good story. Have you been inspired by your teaching assistant Cressida’s name? Your punctuation could be improved a little. However, you have written an interesting and exciting story. Well done!