Hello Alex,
I really enjoyed reading your post as it sent warm feelings pulsing through me. Not because of their un-expected demise but because of how well it was written. However, make sure you check your work as Moby was spelt in-correctly. Aswell as that, when someone new is speaking, remember to start a new line. Apart from those small mistakes, I really liked the way you wrote this piece.
Hello Alex,
I really enjoyed reading your post as it sent warm feelings pulsing through me. Not because of their un-expected demise but because of how well it was written. However, make sure you check your work as Moby was spelt in-correctly. Aswell as that, when someone new is speaking, remember to start a new line. Apart from those small mistakes, I really liked the way you wrote this piece.