1. we loved the word clammy – Ferrari and Shalom
2. it was easy to follow and understand – Mon and Ploy
3. we liked how you extended the sentence when you are saying you are thirsty – Jene, James and Oak
4. you used a question at the end to make the reader want more – Alex, Fawn and Anna
great job with your 100wc. you described everything really well.
keep blogging!
Dear Anna,
Here are some of the reasons we loved your 100wc:
1. we loved the word clammy – Ferrari and Shalom
2. it was easy to follow and understand – Mon and Ploy
3. we liked how you extended the sentence when you are saying you are thirsty – Jene, James and Oak
4. you used a question at the end to make the reader want more – Alex, Fawn and Anna
Thank you,
5TF http://blogs.shrewsbury.ac.th/year5blog/
Well done Anna. A great entry for the 100WC. Interesting, descriptive and well-expressed.