granny

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5 Responses to granny

  1. Alex B says:

    It’s really good. What is Granny’s House? Work on your capitals.

    • lauren says:

      Alex
      Granny’s house is where the Granny lives, in the house. Thankyou for reminding me about nouns starting with capital letters.

  2. kalis says:

    I realy lik your poem its verry good 🙂

  3. luca says:

    Great description Lauren, and you’ve really thought about how real authors would write a story and describe it 😀

  4. sophie says:

    I realy like your writing, good adjectives and you have realy thought about it the discription it is verry good 🙂

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