Tim and moby’s adventure

2 Responses to Tim and moby’s adventure

1. sam says:

   May 23, 2012 at 1:55 pm

   I realy like your story. Its an adventure story with a bit of puzzle in it. my question is how did they get to this mysterious place.
2. luca says:

   May 25, 2012 at 6:36 am

   Great ending, but remember don’t put to many spaces, and remember your use of speech marks

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