precious water

5 Responses to precious water

1. Alfie Z says:

   February 7, 2012 at 10:30 am

   I really like your poem because it’s got lots of different metaphors and adjectives. I really like your metaphor; It is an angel.
   • Louis says:

     February 8, 2012 at 2:20 pm

     Thanks Alfie,
     Like how you said it with lots of description.
2. Emma Franks says:

   February 9, 2012 at 8:04 am

   A really beautiful tanka poem, simple but with a lot of meaning and description for the imagination.
   You have really captured the wonderfulness of water.

   What inspired you to write this poem?
3. Emma Franks says:

   February 9, 2012 at 8:06 am

   I like how you used the metaphor, ‘it is an angel’. What inspired you to write this poem?
4. Emma Franks says:

   February 9, 2012 at 8:08 am

   I like how you used the metaphor ‘it is an angle’. What inspired you to write this poem?

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