Its very good Alfie but the syllables for a tanka poem is 7/5/7/7/7
Hi Jake, Thats for the comment but the syllobles for a tanka poem are 5/7/5/7/7.
Very nice! Are you talking about water in general or specifically a stream? Water all around?
I really like the still of the poem bacause it looks like a rela poem you dont need to inprove on any thing.
I like the description for your poem but you could have made it rhyme.
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Its very good Alfie but the syllables for a tanka poem is 7/5/7/7/7
Hi Jake,
Thats for the comment but the syllobles for a tanka poem are 5/7/5/7/7.
Very nice! Are you talking about water in general or specifically a stream? Water all around?
I really like the still of the poem bacause it looks like a rela poem you dont need to inprove on any thing.
I like the description for your poem but you could have made it rhyme.