Shimmering Water!

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5 Responses to Shimmering Water!

  1. Jake says:

    Its very good Alfie but the syllables for a tanka poem is 7/5/7/7/7

  2. Alfie Z's Mum says:

    Very nice! Are you talking about water in general or specifically a stream? Water all around?

  3. Ida says:

    I really like the still of the poem bacause it looks like a rela poem you dont need to inprove on any thing.

  4. joel says:

    I like the description for your poem but you could have made it rhyme.

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